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Breaking Me Down..

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These times are getting harder, this in turn is making me stronger..
I have to stand up, to get off the ground.
Your life was taken, I think as I wander; with you gone does my happiness still conquer, the sadness I feel?
All pain is a burden on my soul.
Since when did sickness overcome, the love I've put into you?

Beating me... breaking me down...down, down, down... death may be the end, but I don't know when I'll mend.

But hey, life has to go on. but now, even when you're six feet under the ground.
I'm still torn inside.
You're not by my side.
And it kills me inside, as if a part of me died..

Beating me, breaking me down.
Shoving me into isolation, beating me... breaking me down..down..
Death spoke to you and said, 'Work for me, or become part of my collection'. I'm sorry, brother all you needed - wanted.. was my affection.
Hey guys. This is the song I wrote for my baby brother who passed away a few weeks ago due to leukemia. :/
This song has been in the making since he was first diagnosed which was literally a year ago. (I've spend over 40 fucking hours on this.)

Anyways, I thought that I should type it out and post it because I wanted your guy's opinions. Do you like it?

I want it to be perfect.
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:iconcryforeverplz: They were wrong when they said nothing is perfect.